1. Web Banner: Frame 2 needs to contain the first line so it reads "Hang ten at 20 knots." And your CTA? It hasn't changed?
2. Tearout: Can you make it landscape instead of standard. The spacing on the copy is too tight on the sides. Also, can you decrease the warp on your grid. It's too much. You just want a bit of warp.
* Do the slight change on all your grids to be consistent. Thanks.
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2. Tearout: Can you make it landscape instead of standard. The spacing on the copy is too tight on the sides. Also, can you decrease the warp on your grid. It's too much. You just want a bit of warp.
* Do the slight change on all your grids to be consistent. Thanks.
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ok thanks!
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